History 353 – Final Exam –  Two essays due by Wednesday, December 17 at 10: 00am to www.turnitin.com

WHY AM I WRITING THIS?
“All historical writing begins as an effort to answer questions.  We find a puzzle and try to solve it.  When you write a paper for one of your history courses, you must do the same – find a problem that stirs your curiosity and try to solve it.  If you don’t have a problem, you don’t have a paper.” 

-- Richard Marius, A Short Guide to Writing about History (2d ed.), 3

PART ONE: WRITING (DON'T FORGET PART TWO: DISCUSSION)

Essay #1: Write a 1000 word (about 4 pages, double-spaced) analytical essay on ONE of the following questions:

You must support this essay with at least one of the readings assigned in this class (Smith's Not So Quiet or Pearson's I Don't Know How She Does It or the Einhorn article from Becoming Visible or the Stites and Rimmel articles on the Bolshevik Revolution).

Essay #2: Write a 1000 word (about 4 pages, double-spaced) analytical essay on the following question:

You must support this essay with all of the novels assigned in this class (Gaskell’s Mary Barton, Smith's Not So Quiet, and Pearson's I Don't Know How She Does It).  You may also use your notes from any of the films or other readings.

IMPORTANT: Remember that you must cite your sources, even when you do not quote them.  See "Documentation" below.

NOTE: neither essay may be longer than 1200 words.  Figuring out what the most important points are is part of the assignment.  Revising and re-revising so that you can make your points with clarity and succinctly is part of the assignment.

Submitting your paper to turnitin.com: Submit your paper by clicking on the assignment "Final." PLEASE:

Grading:  I will grade these essays on the basis of three categories:
  1. Content:  Part of your agenda in this exam is to demonstrate to me your mastery of the lecture material AND the required reading in this class.  Look for opportunities to show me how well you are able to use them.  For example, do not just write that gender norms for women valued submissiveness in a particular period; show me that your proposition is correct by giving an example from one or two readings in which women are admired for their submissiveness.
  2. Organization/Analysis/Structure:  Devise a solid, analytical thesis statement for each question in your study time.  Do NOT just parrot back the question. (“There are many ways that ideas about women’s role in marriage and the family changed.”)  Frequently, what follows such a thesis is a list of items, without any explanation of how these items are related to one another or why they are more important than other items which were not on the list.  For top grades, compose a thesis which states that you will explain HOW these ideas changed.

  3.              Organize your essay in a way that supports your thesis.  Make sure that each paragraph develops logically from the previous one.  Be sure that the body of your paper remains focused on the thesis; don’t let your writing wander away from it.  Be sure that each paragraph develops just one idea, stated in a topic sentence that explains the point which you are trying to make at any one time.  Don't let yourself get distracted by several different points at once.  Don't become bogged down in explaining a minor point.
  4. Writing:  Historians are writers.  In fact, until the mid-19th century, history was considered a branch of literature.  Therefore you should consider this assignment an opportunity to practice the writing skills which help you make your way in a rewarding career after graduating.

  5. It does you no good to write a masterful thesis and make extensive use of the readings and lectures if your reader cannot understand what on earth you are trying to communicate.  This, by the way, is why I am asking you to do so much reading for this class; the best way to become a good writer is to read, Read, READ!  But to communicate your ideas, you have to use standard formal English, you have to use correct grammar, and you have to demonstrate that you know the correct meanings of the words you use. Your writing must be clear and precise and very thorough.  Use a formal tone in these essays and use the past tense when writing about the past.
               All college students should know how to compose essays in standard formal English at the level defined in the diagnostic test given in September.  Proofread your work!  If the essay has more than three of these usage errors, I will deduct one letter grade for the essay.  If it contains more than six, the essay will not receive a passing grade.
Documentation: You must also learn to document your research for these essays – and work done in any other class at UD!  This means that you must cite your sources, EVEN IF YOU PARAPHRASE THEM RATHER THAN QUOTING THEM.  Let me make that clear.  Yes, you cite quotations, of course. But you also cite any material that you use that did not come out of your own brain.  I will expect one (sometimes two) citations per paragraph, unless the material in that paragraph is entirely your original thought.  Inadequately documented essays will not receive a passing grade.
You may use either the MLA/parenthetical citation style along with a Works Cited list or the Chicago-Turabian/footnote-endnote style.  (If you choose these footnotes or endnotes, no Works Cited list is necessary.)  Be sure that you know how to use the citation style you choose correctly!  For examples, see http://academic.udayton.edu/MarybethCarlson/paper-guide.htm#citations.  YES, YOU MUST CITE LECTURE NOTES.  ONE EXAMPLE OF HOW TO DO THIS IS INCLUDED AT THE SITE ABOVE.

Part Two, Discussion:
We will meet as a group on December 17th at 10:10 am to discuss our individual assessments of change in European gender norms.  This meeting is required by regulations enacted by UD's Academic Senate, a body which includes student representatives.  To see these regulations yourself, see:

http://academic.udayton.edu/senate/documents/senate%20documents/Final%20Examination%20Week%20-%20I-03-10.htm

Grading Options:  The overall grade for this final will be reckoned according to your choice from either of these two weighting schemes.  Indicate which choice you prefer at the top of the first page of your essay: 70%  Essay + 30% Discussion OR 90%  Essay + 10% Discussion